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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

ok, this is just wowza. i cant with how much beauty is in this, but i do have some problems <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/f/f…" width="15" height="15" alt=":(" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="380" title=":( (Sad)"/>. I'd like to start off this the feathers. Realistically feathers are a bit more messy than this swan's feathers are. And where the feathers are shorter, there need to be a bit more detail then the longer ones, ya get what i'm trying to say? probably not, i don't make to much sense. The water seems to, still. Now i see the ripples you did near the swan, that's not what i'm going at. Its more of, the water, that's more farther off into the distance, isn't reflecting off the light as much,or doesn't have any ripple effects, making it look still as ever. And the shading of the water seems to go off of the tree shading, which water and trees are a bit different. (wow i'm so picky XD) i can't say i hate the tree, because of how detailed is <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>, it makes the picture hotter lol. Now the sky is a bit, bland. Similar to the water, adding a bit more detail, to show the sun is setting, by adding a little bit of faint stars maybe where the areas are the most dark, would make is seem detailed i guess. I love the color choice you chose, because a salmon color is like, one of my favorite colors because its so pastel and stuff (wow such a description) If you were to take anything away, like the sun, or the swan, or the beautiful tree, this piece wouldn't be the same, and wouldn't be as stunning, i would say that this probably isn't your best, and you could to better, having to look upon your art, but its still amazing to look at because of the mood it gives.